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Book Review: Storm’s Herald (The Stormfall Chronicles, #1) by J.W. Golan

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Overall opinion: Intense and adventurous Epic YA Fantasy that reads like High Fantasy for adults in a “vintage” writing style that’s a perfect fit for the world built.

Disclaimer: I received a free copy from the author in exchange for an honest review.

β€œShe wanted to become a druid, like her teacher. She wanted to become something. Not waste her life away in a village that would hardly notice her absence.”

Title: Storm’s Herald
Author: J. W. Golan
Publisher: J. W. Golan
Publication date: January 19th 2019
Genres: Epic Fantasy, Young Adult
Series: The Stormfall Chronicles, Book #1
Goodreads: link link
My Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Summary (short & sweet)

A peasant girl who dreams of becoming a sorceress, a boy who imagines himself a knight – trailed by a ruthless mercenary armed with an ancient sword.

Lynette is a poor farm girl who wants to become a sorceress. Baxter is a young squire with too much innocence and honesty to survive in his county. Two young people brought by fate to cross paths and encounter mythical creatures that are the norm in their world: gnomes, ogres, goblins, giants, and fae. There is an obscure force threatening the world of both fae and humankind, and none of the two teenagers can really turn their back on what’s fated to happen.

Edition (Paperback)

Storm’s Herald is a self-published book through Amazon’s CreateSpace with a lovely soft cover that feels like cloth under touch. Golan’s relative’s design for the cover, featuring one of the main characters, is also spot on for the story and where it is going.

The Backstory for My Storm’s Herald Book Review

I found J.W. Golan on Goodreads around October 2019 while looking for free ARCs from indie authors. His plot intrigued me, so I offered myself as an ARC reader for his second book in the Stormfall Chronicles series, secretly hoping he’d send me the first book to review, too.

Well… sometimes wishes become real: Golan sent me both books in print, after reading about my preference for the sake of my eyesight. I was taken aback by so much generosity!

On Nov 8 I bookstagrammed both books because I was too happy to have received them:

I get rather excited to hold physical books that I was waiting for, much more than any EPUBs in my Samsung tablet.

Now let’s begin the actual book review for Storm’s Herald, like I did for Haley Walden’s Defender of Histories.

The Actual Storm’s Herald Book Review

My Storm's Herald Book Review - Photo of me holding the book

Golan’s story is a story of the world and the quest before it’s a story of the characters and their personal lives. It’s world-driven and quest-driven before it’s character-driven, even though when it’s characters to own the stage, they own it for good!

But most of the time, it’s the major events that take place in the built world that direct the characters’ decision to do this or that, whenever taking decisions based only on a character’s own desires would lead to disaster.

That’s not to mean the characters are spineless beings carried by the current of events… just the contrary! They are strong and resilient, even when they’re temporarily fragile. They take events by the figurative horns and make their honest effort to redirect them or at least be at least partially in control.

Isn’t that how life works? We take decisions and try to do what we want to do at all times, but things in life happen that are not always in our favor. So we react and sometimes attack, but whatever the outcome, we want to feel in control.

That’s an aspect in this book that I loved and I could relate with, as a human being.

Golan’s characters are fully immersed in their world, and they shape it.

Generally speaking, I found the writing style to be more suitable for an upper adult reader than a young adult, but that may be only my perception. It’s descriptive and filled with imagery, which fits perfectly with the world created.

The prose has a “vintage” taste to it. Think Jane Austen. Elegant, sometimes serious. In fact, initially I thought this was old-style High Fantasy than YA Fantasy.

The main characters are introduced in the first chapters, then we get to know other characters who have an important role in the story as the narration progresses.

Our four main people are:

  • Lynette, a young farm girl with a dream to become a druidic sorceress like her half-fae teacher
  • Baxter, a courageous but innocent young squire
  • Eirlon, a gnome who trades in rare antiquities
  • Princess Elise, the heir of the fae kingdom and a person with a great vision
  • Garth, a mysterious man carrying a much more mysterious blade
  • Kalden, an apprentice healer

The worldbuilding uncovers chapter by chapter, and it’s one of the protagonists of Storm’s Herald along with the characters. No clashing elements, no modern ideas inserted by mistake in the narration: the world and its characters are in perfect harmony with one another, and they belong.

The world setting is medieval as it’s typical of a classic Fantasy novel.

Coming to the themes of the narration:

  • The rebellion against a fate decided by others to shape one’s own future
  • The finding that one’s fate is much greater than one had imagined
  • The value of honesty, hard work and innocence in a corrupted world
  • A quest to find something that has more value than it appears from facts
  • The importance of taking a leap of faith when there’s a calling behind a choice

For the things that I didn’t like about Storm’s Herald, I identified four and they mostly concern formatting and writing style choices:

  • Spacing between paragraphs: double spacing is good for reading on screen, but it actually made the novel hard to read on paper, as if there was a mental pause between one and the other when they were actually sequential. I’m not sure if this is J.W. Golan’s experimental choice or a mistake, but I would love to see a print edition with single spacing between paragraphs.
  • Unnecessary repetitions: this might be an editing issue that’s easy to fix in a second edition of the book. There were several occurrences in the text of repetitions such as “her/my teacher, *Name” when as a reader I already knew the character’s teacher was *Name.
  • A frequent use of questions to make world-explaining answers: while I understand the seldom need for this narrative artifice, I find it anti-climatic when used too often. Naturally, this is a personal perception and it’s in no way a mistake from the author. It’s just that I didn’t like it because it bored me after a while.
  • Lack of climax during the most intense action scenes: this might be part of Golan’s writing style, but I didn’t feel emotionally engaged by the writing during these scenes. I still enjoyed them because the descriptive style helped me visualizing them clearly in my mind, as if I was watching a movie, but the writing itself felt emotionally neutral, too tranquil for the action.

However, none of these “nays” were a detriment that kept me from turning pages (excepting the paragraph spacing sometimes, and I’m wondering if I felt more emotional neutrality because of that spacing?)

If you don’t mind any of those “nays”, by all means check the book out because the story and the worldbuilding are simply amazing and they’re the reason I gave this book a 4.5 star rating out of 5.

As usual, I’m going to end my review with my favorite quote from the book:

“Do not be so unkind to yourself. You are lesser to no one. And even if you were not his biological child, did that knowledge change his opinion of you in any way? He could have left you, could have walked away. No one would have blamed him. He and your mother loved you, believed in you. Maybe you should believe a little too.

Conclusion of My Storm’s Herald Book Review & Personal Comments

My favorite parts in the book were those involving Lynette, especially her budding friendship with a fae named Glynis and that with Baxter. Naive kids, but with great inner strength.

I also loved the character of Eirlon, the gnome who feels like a father figure throughout the narration.

I could go on and on with J.W. Golan’s characters! And I have yet to find one in his book that has no depth of some kind, even a minor character.

Overall, I recommend Storm’s Herald to Fantasy and YA lovers who appreciate a touch of “vintage” writing in a story, closer to Austen’s and Tolkien’s styles, and all people who love a well-done worldbuilding and character quest over character-driven action.

Reading & Watching Recommendations

If you loved Pride and Prejudice and The Lord of The Rings, as well as The Neverending Story, I wholeheartedly recommend reading Storm’s Herald, preferably on a couch (with a warm blanket in winter) and a cup of tea. You have to enjoy the detail!

For movie recommendations, in addition to the 2005 edition of Pride and Prejudice and the moviezation of The Lord of The Rings, a good movie to watch is The Princess Bride (1987).

Thank you so much for reading my Storm’s Herald book review! I appreciate your time and I hope I could give you another interesting book to look into. Bye!

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Booklover. Hobby artist. Author of the Rolamaton the Robocity webseries. Also author of short stories and novels for upcoming publication. Countryside demigirl who works as an artisan in her daily life. Currently in a happy relationship. Come say hi on Twitter @dospetti and Instagram @liabooklover


  • Kayleigh Zara

    The spacing between the paragraphs would have really irritated me too! I’m really big on having the right amount of space with text. This sounds like a really interesting book x

    • Lia Mara Dospetti

      Me too, and to be honest, that was the only thing in the book I disliked to irritation. Everything else I could close an eye on, because the story is capturing and the magic system and the world that Golan built are simply fantastic (in both senses, hahah!).

      Thanks for commenting!

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